Erika......

Name: Erika

Age: 13ish

Race: angelxvampire(angelpire) classed as a fallen or dark angel

Personality: it really depends on the day sometimes she is happy sometimes she is sad sometimes she is just completely random

Rank: Halfbreed Archer

Weapons: bow and arrows

Realm: in the realm of light close to the border of the dark realm

Likes:
1: food
2:candy
3:reading
4: other halfbreeds

Dislikes:
1:people who make fun of her 2 tone wingsand/or for being a half breed
2:the terror realm

Demons/spirits: a zombi bunny coutysy of seth XD

Family: none orphan

Song: I'll be there for you (friends theam song)

History/Bio: Erika was born of a young girls dream she is a hunter and a thief and as far as she knows she is an orphan she has no use for guns but she loves music and video games(especially both put together *cough*rockband*cough* she often wanders around looking for something to eat or someone to talk to or steal from she has the powe to 'barrow'other pplz poweres

Random comment: I'm not quite sure rockband exists in the dreamworld, but I guess if some kid dreams about it then its possible lol

Now you will have to be more specific about your realm (not "light i guess" but rather "realm of light") and you will have to specify because at one place you say "for being a half breed the terror relm" and you said you where from light so I am a little confused.

This is optional and you don't need to but you could put your likes and dislikes more like:

--like 1
--like 2

and stuff it would be easier to read but the way you did it is acceptable I have no complaints.

Just one thing, which you can ask me to edit for you, would be to claim your main race such as "Fallen Angel (Angel + Vampire Half-Blood)" instead of "Angel + Vampire Half blood" that way we know what race to put you in. You can ask me to edit that for you I don't mind.

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But yea the main thing you need to fix is that confusion with the realm and then your application is pretty much accepted.


Edit: Oh one more thing, last name? If she doesn't know it just specify that she doesn't somewhere like at the end of the history. I guess its not of great importance though.

Approved